Correlations

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By jhamann

"Reason only knows what it has succeeded in learning..."

Fyodor Dostoevsky

Notes From the Underground

Correlation upon correlation,

strong correlation's that hold up

the glass pillars of natures

Rome.

The points all scatter

in a positive manner towards

the center of Po flowing

the riches of broken

pigeon wings through Milan,

as if heaven began

on the Apennines.

When reason returns

and sees that another rape

has occurred more devastating

than in the beginning,

a correlation is made,

when one lonely bird is

gently lifted from blackening

traffic consuming the Coliseum,

and set on a colorless

corner of a gas station

to await its fate other than

that of the wheel.

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kathryn1000 profile image

kathryn1000 5 months ago

I like that one

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jhamann Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you for stopping by kathryn1000.

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ThoughtSandwiches Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

dang jhamann...

This is awesome. When did you go to Italy? Hitting all the buttons when I vote...both here and in Rome...cuz..when in Rome...

Thomas

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jhamann Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you Thomas.

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phdast7 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Jamie- You are quite a poet. Incredible images and great use of words. I have never been to Rome, but in my mind's eye I see the Coliseum and the reference to the Po River and the Apennines (I am a historian) was terrific. I will be SHARING this with others.

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AudreyHowitt Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

This makes me sad an d happy at the same time--you manipulate emotions masterfully in this piece--Sharing--

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tarajeyaram 3 months ago

Wonderfully written. A great poem but it reminds me about the darkside. Thanks for sharing.

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jhamann Hub Author 3 months ago

phdast7-Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a wonderful comment.

AudreyHowitt-Thank you for reading and sharing!

tarajeyaram-Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry I hope you have an excellent day.

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