From Earth to the Moon

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By jhamann

I. To Begin With

All American guns arm

missing limbed mechanics,

grand gunners they are,

with metal scalps,

hooked handed messengers of war.

Bowie knives, arm chairs, whiskey, cotton,

tobacco, whale oil, apple pie eating

death savants.

II. As the Story Goes

The mechanisms of their

old hall clock, through the years, stored

all the tears of the last war

to lube the silver springs, so

as the time passes light, no

other watches will be so late,

as such policy demands, so

such is war. Yet this year we declare death,

doom unto the seas

of the moon, without a ploy,

we wait for slow victory.

The moon - a celestial

body, idle and wicked,

revolving, engaging in

revelries of sin, distilled

slowly in rays of morose

light. Not so close to declare

thunderous applause to war

fought with no more than air.

III. Drought

One last earnest yet elegant epitaph

to the foulest of my fears,

granted to me with a fogged grace:

Oh, monstrous moon,

I am opened to you and oppressed.

Remove me from rough reality,

senile and sour in insecurity,

tattered, torn,

I am vile in my vanity,

by letting the moon

wear a smile of red wine,

where I should be standing.

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poshcoffeeco profile image

poshcoffeeco Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago

Great work...you have a gift and you us it well.

Vote up/awesome

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jhamann Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you poshcoffeeco, thank you for stopping by. Happy Thanksgiving!

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ThoughtSandwiches Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Jaime...

You are correct my friend...the frenzied beat of poetic war does speak to me! I like the the doomsday clock being oiled by the "tears of the last war," however, mu favorite line is ..."earnest yet elegant epitaph to the foulest of my fears."

Strong stuff good sir! Have an awesome holiday as I push the many UP votes to indicate my happiness with your work!

Thomas

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jhamann Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you Thomas.

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Seafarer Mama Level 5 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi Jhamann,

Wow. Voted this poem hub up and beautiful. Had to read it several times...but loved it more with each read....romantic in a way...sort of gothic...but very contemporary and very real!

Namaste

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jhamann Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you Seafarer Mama.

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tobusiness Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi jhamann, I see I'm not the only one to read this several times, but it's sure worth the read, you've done it again, voted up.

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jhamann Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank You tobusiness.

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NightFlower Level 4 Commenter 4 months ago

I'm glad I was able to have the privilege of your poetry and it is so inspiring. As a poet other poet spur me into action...because of reading your work I got mo' ideas to write -smile.

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jhamann Hub Author 4 months ago

Nightflower-thank you for stopping by and I am glad I was able to imspire. Jamie

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Kosmo Level 6 Commenter 2 months ago

I'm not sure I understand this poem, but I rarely understand many of them. Nevertheless, I like your use of words. Later!

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jhamann Hub Author 2 months ago

Kosmo-Thank you for stopping by for a read. I am glad you did. Jamie

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mollymeadows Level 5 Commenter 6 weeks ago

Yes, I had to chew it several times, too, and roll it around for awhile. Loved these: "...apple pie eating/death savants," "all the tears of the last war/to lube the silver springs," "One last earnest yet elegant epitaph/to the foulest of my fears," "I am vile in my vanity/by letting the moon/wear a smile of red wine." You should try entering poetry contests with these, Jamie. Try your state poetry association. They run contests with cash prizes. I think you might win one or two.

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