From Earth to the Moon
68
I. To Begin With
All American guns arm
missing limbed mechanics,
grand gunners they are,
with metal scalps,
hooked handed messengers of war.
Bowie knives, arm chairs, whiskey, cotton,
tobacco, whale oil, apple pie eating
death savants.
II. As the Story Goes
The mechanisms of their
old hall clock, through the years, stored
all the tears of the last war
to lube the silver springs, so
as the time passes light, no
other watches will be so late,
as such policy demands, so
such is war. Yet this year we declare death,
doom unto the seas
of the moon, without a ploy,
we wait for slow victory.
The moon - a celestial
body, idle and wicked,
revolving, engaging in
revelries of sin, distilled
slowly in rays of morose
light. Not so close to declare
thunderous applause to war
fought with no more than air.
III. Drought
One last earnest yet elegant epitaph
to the foulest of my fears,
granted to me with a fogged grace:
Oh, monstrous moon,
I am opened to you and oppressed.
Remove me from rough reality,
senile and sour in insecurity,
tattered, torn,
I am vile in my vanity,
by letting the moon
wear a smile of red wine,
where I should be standing.
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Jaime...
You are correct my friend...the frenzied beat of poetic war does speak to me! I like the the doomsday clock being oiled by the "tears of the last war," however, mu favorite line is ..."earnest yet elegant epitaph to the foulest of my fears."
Strong stuff good sir! Have an awesome holiday as I push the many UP votes to indicate my happiness with your work!
Thomas
Hi Jhamann,
Wow. Voted this poem hub up and beautiful. Had to read it several times...but loved it more with each read....romantic in a way...sort of gothic...but very contemporary and very real!
Namaste
Hi jhamann, I see I'm not the only one to read this several times, but it's sure worth the read, you've done it again, voted up.
I'm glad I was able to have the privilege of your poetry and it is so inspiring. As a poet other poet spur me into action...because of reading your work I got mo' ideas to write -smile.
I'm not sure I understand this poem, but I rarely understand many of them. Nevertheless, I like your use of words. Later!
Yes, I had to chew it several times, too, and roll it around for awhile. Loved these: "...apple pie eating/death savants," "all the tears of the last war/to lube the silver springs," "One last earnest yet elegant epitaph/to the foulest of my fears," "I am vile in my vanity/by letting the moon/wear a smile of red wine." You should try entering poetry contests with these, Jamie. Try your state poetry association. They run contests with cash prizes. I think you might win one or two.














poshcoffeeco Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago
Great work...you have a gift and you us it well.
Vote up/awesome